Dear Ms Daine's what I am trying to say is there should be no homework, I hope you will agree with me after reading my arguments.
I believe this strongly because it is a waste of time. We could be spending value time with our mum and dad, or cleaning the house! Even though most kids don't like house work, they prefer it over homework. We complete 6 hours of work for 5 days which is 30 hours of school work! After school is our break time to do our own house. It is also important for brain development to have down time for children. I am really tired after school because all day I have been running, walking and jogging and working.
We also need to spend more time with our Family because their life could be coming to an end! So we need to spend more time with them, to make the most of the time we have together.
Homework is very stressful and makes us tired which makes us grumpy. Doing homework will stress us out and put us out of our happy mood then we will be all grumpy to our parents.
To conclude, it is my strong opinion that children of primary school age should be free from the burden of doing homework. I am sure that as a compassionate, caring, thoughtful, catholic you agree with me I appreciate the time you have taken to read my exposition and hope you have a great day!
Thursday, August 17, 2017
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ReplyDeleteGood job Niamh👍🏻 I liked how you kind of made me think twice about it and made me agree with some of your arguments!
ReplyDeleteMalia, well done on giving some positive praise. Next step is to tell Niamh how she can improve her writing.
DeleteA nice start to your blogging Niamh, well done. I like your arguments, but as you don't do all the tasks in home learning I wonder if you are writing this for other people?
ReplyDeleteYour conclusion and introduction are very clear.